Paperman12's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dj Clayface - E Tarded [Prev]]

Good

I like it, especially the piano and the chorus.

[Phantom - (WF1)/F-777]

Fits Halloween!

The title says it all =D. Its great man, really good breakbeat, very energetic, the melody was awesome, and I love the title!

[Harder Better Faster Stronger,]

Best Remix YET!

I love that damn guitar! Its great man, I didn't really find anything wrong except maybe that you never really had a main melody going through but who cares xD, its still pleasure for the ears =D.

[Dream Of Me]

Its real good!

Its just too repetitive =(...

[[DN] Happy Summer {Remix}]

I like it

You've improved :P but the main melody sounds like rob mayth.

DanceNation responds:

Thanks bro, Yea, I was just trying out some new skills I learned. Glad you liked it :D

[Clayface - Velocity]

1:40

Is awesome :O.

The intro needs a bit more liveliness if you know what I'm saying. Snare rolls running through, weird percussion here and there but its all in my head lol. I can't do it so I shouldn't be talking :P.

Really good buildup and I love that snare roll. The chorus is good but that 3xOSC sounding thing is a bit overpowering. Idk, its also a bit annoying until about 4:10. I feel like the chorus could be a bit better too. Oh and nice ending.

Overall I give this a 9 but I'll give you a 10 cause I'm awesome =).

[Teh EarthShaker]

Pretty Pro

But too short :/ ... Its really pro but the bass is a bit weak, might be my headphones. Also, its a bit repetitive. Nice ending.

[~TF~ Through the Cosmos]

Lol

I can see you tried to make it trance, but it really ended up being a DNB of some sort lol. I like it though, pretty good, especially the piano and melody.. 10 for your first attempt at making trance, even though it really isn't. How long have you been producing?

TylonFlame responds:

Thanks:) When I started I wrote it for about a week, but I couldn't deal with drum. Not long ago I continued and finished it.... and of course I've been fixing it a lot of times. I didn't want to make real trance though, I just couldn't decide what genre it is (trance or dnb?) Thx for your review again

[ToneScythe DEMO]

ToneScythe FTW

Lol well you were right about you not being a god at composing, but I look forward to this VSTi.

[She [Aelias Mix] prev]

Nice

You got a good chance of winning, great job man!