Paperman12's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[St0rm - Joy 'o Matic]

Great beginning

4/5 or 8/10. The chorus needs more motion to it (more sound). Just bass, lead, drums, piano, and strings doesn't really make us want to dance. Also, for mastering, add a compressor on the preset brickwall if you want it to have motion and less distortion. I didn't see anything really bad with the mastering, but I would recommend more instruments.

St0rmChaser responds:

oo thanks a lot paperman =D.
that is criticm to my heart !. instructions =D.

so i can assume that when i put a compressor on preset brickwall, all of my problems are gone =O. more motion and no distortion =D.

Thanks a bunch again =D.
St0rmChaser

[Sonix1241 - Mini Intro]

Amazing

Hey bro it sounds amazing. I hope your making this into a song.

[B0UNC3 - Paradise on E Re]

DAMN

Dude I love this song. I have this on my ipod.. I never knew you made it! DJ Hopar remixed it and that's what I have, but It's almost exactly the same.. I never knew you made this.. It has inspired me a lot and I love it.

[Sonix1241 - Another Day]

Really good!

Its awesome but when you put the snare together with the drum (it sounds great) it makes it seem like there is distortion though.

[Scratch [Demo]]

Nice bass!

Very nice bass. One problem, the drums need a bit more work. Try making them more complicated, have build ups, and use shakers or maybe different hats.

bman3737 responds:

Thanks for the response! I'm not sure if you can tell, but the ending that makes this song a loop was actually just me trying out different combos of drums. I do plan on adding some minor variations to the drums though.

[B0UNC3 - My frequency (Short)]

Hell yea!!

I'm pumped! Awesome intro, made me feel like chorus was coming.

[Solar Rays]

Ehh

Your getting there.. Keep practicing.

[Lady Gaga - Just Dance [REMIX]]

Holy shit...

Better than the original! I wish you would put more instruments into it instead of mostly bass and drums throughout the whole song.. The little saw appearing between times was good but I wish there would be a sort of amazing chorus.. Just all out melody..

[B0UNC3 - Voyager]

Great Job!

Its amazing but the beginning could of been better.

B0UNC3 responds:

I agree :P

[Improv Number 1]

Nice skills

7 for bad quality.

Very nice skills but why didn't you use a midi cable and hook up your piano to FL Studio so you could record the pattern in there?

BlazingDragon responds:

Unfortunately, I do not even own a midi cable that is compatible with my computer, and for some reason, my keyboard will not work with a sustain pedal. That, and this was just something off the top of my head while improvising. I don't think that I could duplicate it quite the same.

Thank you for the review!