Great beginning
4/5 or 8/10. The chorus needs more motion to it (more sound). Just bass, lead, drums, piano, and strings doesn't really make us want to dance. Also, for mastering, add a compressor on the preset brickwall if you want it to have motion and less distortion. I didn't see anything really bad with the mastering, but I would recommend more instruments.
oo thanks a lot paperman =D.
that is criticm to my heart !. instructions =D.
so i can assume that when i put a compressor on preset brickwall, all of my problems are gone =O. more motion and no distortion =D.
Thanks a bunch again =D.
St0rmChaser
Amazing
Hey bro it sounds amazing. I hope your making this into a song.
Really good!
Its awesome but when you put the snare together with the drum (it sounds great) it makes it seem like there is distortion though.
Nice bass!
Very nice bass. One problem, the drums need a bit more work. Try making them more complicated, have build ups, and use shakers or maybe different hats.
Thanks for the response! I'm not sure if you can tell, but the ending that makes this song a loop was actually just me trying out different combos of drums. I do plan on adding some minor variations to the drums though.
Ehh
Your getting there.. Keep practicing.
Great Job!
Its amazing but the beginning could of been better.
I agree :P
Nice skills
7 for bad quality.
Very nice skills but why didn't you use a midi cable and hook up your piano to FL Studio so you could record the pattern in there?
Unfortunately, I do not even own a midi cable that is compatible with my computer, and for some reason, my keyboard will not work with a sustain pedal. That, and this was just something off the top of my head while improvising. I don't think that I could duplicate it quite the same.
Thank you for the review!
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